3-skills post(comparing and contrasting)

Hello guys, I'm going to tell what may favourite camp is. In the camp Big apple, Ranch west and Head starts splash. First, I'm going to tell you about the safety, Second about the location of of the camp,and last , I'm going to tell you about activities.Now I'm going to begin.

Firstly, I'm going to tell how safe the cam is for each one. The camp Big apple is in the New york with a domitary.If you live in the dormitary ther can be a fight without teachers knowing. The camp Ranch west
stays in homestay, but some guardian will be mean to you. Head start splash, you need one of the parents have to follow student so there won'y be harmful and a bab situation such as teasing.

Secondly, The location. The camp Big apple is in new york which takes about 13 hours so you might don't want to go there. Second the Ranch west camp which is in canada takes 15 hours which you don't even want to think about it.But the camp Head start splash is in the philipippines so it will take only 3 hours to go.

lastly, I'm going to tell you about the activities. Head start spalsh camp has snorkeling, fishing and so on.
The Ranch west has Horse bake riding, river rafting, hiking and so on. The last camp big apples has city tour.

Seconf skills post (paraphrasing)-1

Bear attacks

The one that Mr.Reardon made:However, if you are still worried about bear attacks, there are several ways to reduce the chances of being attacked by a bear.

The one that I made: However if you are stil scared, thre are some ways to decrese the chances of being offense the chances being offensed by a bear.

second skills post (summerizing)-1

Bear attack

As we go hiling in backwood of North America, some people get fear of getting attacked by a bear.But there is extremely less chance to be attacked by a bear.
Actually, It has more chance to be killed coming to the backwood and car crash.
In the U.S graph the bear attack and got killed was only 5people,but the car crash
was 101people.If you are still worried there are ways to survive.If we stay together
bear will be afraid and can't attack to you.

Owlcity

What the world eats???????

Comparing Africa and our country Korea, I think that Africa is really poor. Not just a food , How they survive, how much they use and where they live.They only use one dollar for one week,also they do not live in the house or apartment like us. Rather than this, They live in the tents. Also for food there is only water and rice or vegetables that is not cooked. I felt sorry for them.

Writing: pretending that I have traveled to africa.

When I traved to africa I saw poor peoples. They looked like a monster. The reason why they were like that was about malnutrition. They couldn't had a good food like us .Also they eat with their hands too. I wanted to give them a food and a fork.They eat the food outside too!!!I felt that they would be cold. But I had to tour Africa so I couldn't gave them a food. When got back to home I decided to help poor people in Korea too, I should help them with Unicef.

About this picture:They eat grains,wheat, bottle of water, some fruit and spices.They live in a tent in the field.


Reference: Time photo's(What the world eats.)

I dont like vegetables!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But ilike fruits^^^^

I like lots of kinds of food.But  my favourite fruit is peach. The reason why I like peach is that it is sweet and little bit sour.(I'm meaning the skin of peach)On the other hand I dont like vegetables.But I'm trying to fix these habit.

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